We sit in Star Wars and analyze the writing: "You know, George, I really feel that the characters here need to be the heart of the story and you're sort of losing focus with all the set pieces. Maybe if you restructured a bit to spend more time on the relationships of the characters it would be more compelling. And you need to work on your dialogue."
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branchandroot
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Date: 2005-05-09 06:15 pm (UTC)Could be fun. Until the other fans kill us.