I have to admit, it's pretty hot and heavy for a tweener PG-rated novel. Except I'm so spoiled by fic now, I'm just going for god's sake, get it on already. Your whiny UST is getting annoying.

Also, vampire/human love stories have been done so many times and so much better it's just galling that this one seems unaware of the potential in the set-up. Of course, Stephenie Meyer seems to have parlayed this turd into obscene commercial success, so a part of me is in awe.