ext_6801 ([identity profile] ivy03.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ivyfic 2005-05-09 06:15 pm (UTC)

We sit in Star Wars and analyze the writing: "You know, George, I really feel that the characters here need to be the heart of the story and you're sort of losing focus with all the set pieces. Maybe if you restructured a bit to spend more time on the relationships of the characters it would be more compelling. And you need to work on your dialogue."

Could be fun. Until the other fans kill us.

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